tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36128333.post5311856862610721410..comments2023-06-03T04:06:34.519-04:00Comments on Reminiscences of a Bleeding Soul: The CrusadersDebbiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05438734318743201179noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36128333.post-56825416518201740622010-10-07T14:49:13.090-04:002010-10-07T14:49:13.090-04:00Hi Debbie. Was searching for my blog which it app...Hi Debbie. Was searching for my blog which it appears is unsearchable and found yours instead. Enjoyed the poems I read. Found them thought-provoking. I found two little 'criticisms'. Firstly, is there an error in the line "or that breaks are moral code of right and wrong"? Should it read "breaks our moral..."? Now I've forgotten the other one, but I think it was the word chaos in the poem about God. It had two hh's or something. I point this out because I feel it detracts from your poems, which are written in a style I enjoyed. If you would like to visit my blog it is http://bleedingmoonpoetry.blogspot.comCatherine Mackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07740025648799655351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36128333.post-19781904174619234802010-09-21T16:53:53.829-04:002010-09-21T16:53:53.829-04:00i like this poem, i can relatei like this poem, i can relateBleeding poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01048365104739188000noreply@blogger.com